Task by Task · Free local practice
Ask AI for feedback that explains a specific mistake
Authored source and prepared response excerpts. This example runs locally; files selected here stay in browser memory.
Highlight the lost condition
- Proposed 15 October
- Subject to approval
- Flawed draft says launches
Explain the changed meaning and repair that cause. A generic score or nicer tone does not teach the next attempt.
Take the technique to your next job
Review this draft against the supplied source and task.
For each material mistake, quote the affected draft phrase, point to
the source passage, explain the changed meaning and propose a correction.
Prioritise the errors that affect the reader's decision.
Explain one useful technique I can apply on the next attempt.
Do not give generic praise, a numerical grade or invented source evidence.
Keep sound parts of the draft rather than rewriting everything.